1. I'm relatively happy with my first paper. There are a few grammatical errors that I found after re-reading it a couple times that I will need to fix.
2. I was able to pull a little information on how my essay should be written from looking at some of the other papers in the class.
3. At this point, to help make my writing better, I think it would be helpful to have others read my paper and point out areas where I was either to vague or the information just didn't make sense.
4.The educational experience I chose to write about was coming to an understanding that I, in general, just have control over myself.
5.I wanted the reader to come away with an understanding of what issues protruded in my life before the learning of the lesson and how my life was altered afterwards.
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